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Wednesday, April 28, 2004

For anyone who's interested....

How far do the sources support the idea that Germany’s military build-up showed that she was preparing for war in the years 1899-1914?

When war began in 1914 Europe was thrown against itself with the two opposing power blocks of the Triple Alliance and the Triple Entendre. However it is widely viewed that preparation for war began many years previously, from around 1899 and the ‘cause’ (the Archduke Franz Ferdinand’s assassination) was merely a trigger.

Source one, written by Prince Von Bulow, takes a very obvious German view of Europe in 1899. As the German Chancellor Von Bulow was in a very important position his opinions and comments, along with the Kaiser’s in source four, are particularly important. The source indirectly supports the argument of Germany’s military build-up by defending Germany and making her appear as a martyr, the “slave of humanity”. Von Bulow portrays Germany as a country of “good fortune and power and prosperity” that suffers a lot of “envy”. This picture is used to defend Germany’s military build-up “without a strong army and a strong navy, there can be no welfare for us”. The source emphatically supports the statement that, in 1899 Germany was preparing for war and therefore was building up her armed forces. The source clearly links to source four as both are written by men of power and both excuse Germany’s military build-up by deflecting the blame on other countries.

Source two, taken from 1814, is in the position of having experienced the previous fifteen years of military build-up from Germany. And is therefore presumably knowledgeable of Germany’s preparations between 1899 and 1914. However the source largely ignores any build-up and instead focuses on the repercussions of the assassination of the Archduke Franz Ferdinand. This therefore shows an element of naivety on the part of the paper, that they were unaware of Germany’s military build-up. This could be because the paper is Socialist and would therefore have been very pacifist towards all military action. On the other hand the source could support the argument that there was no build-up at all. The statement “fearful warning” also supports this and suggests that the Triple Alliance were unprepared for war. The source doesn’t comfortably fit with any of the others, as there is too much of a sense of naivety about it. However it does contrast with most of them because of this, particularly source three which shows that Germany were ready for war.

Source three again looks at the Austro-Hungarian pre-war reaction. As it is a source written by an English man its authenticy must be taken into account. Nevertheless the source supports the idea that preparations were put into effect before Franz Ferdinand’s assassination in 1914. The war was described as “inevitable which suggests that both Austria-Hungary and its puppet-master Germany were thoroughly prepared for war after military build-up since 1899. This source contrasts with both sources one and four in that it doesn’t excuse Germany’s military build-up nor blame it on anyone else. This is most probably because the author is English and therefore would not like any blame to be suggested against Britain.

Source four links very clearly to the first source in that it is written from a distinctly German perspective. Obviously Kaiser Wilhelm II had a virtually totalitarian rule over Germany and therefore he would be solely responsible for any pre-meditated preparation for war. The words “secret memorandum” are highly significant, particularly in association with source one, in that, whilst they don’t guarantee complete objectivity, they show the writer was being honest in their judgements. Source four could be seen as having more value than source one as it is both probably honest and the Kaiser’s own thoughts. Alternatively source one does show Germany’s preparations for war in 1899 whereas source four comments on the inevitability of war in 1914. The Kaiser is very defensive of Germany’s preparations for war and deflects the blame onto Britain and France saying their “ultimate object is the overthrow of Germany” this is used as the excuse for starting the Naval race with Britain, just as source one does. Because the source is so defensive and makes the Kaiser appear as a martyr it would appear to be very genuine and makes the Kaiser seem very naïve in his leadership.

Source five is excellent at showing the attitude of Germans in 1914. Because of its form as a poem it contrasts with the other sources as it is written by an ordinary man. Because it is a poem it is open to literary exaggeration which must be taken into context. The poem is patriotic and war-like “slaughter thy millions of adversaries” and implores Germany to “hate now!… take no prisoners” but doesn’t shed any information on Germany’s military build-up. It does however presume that Germany, in 1914, was prepared for war “Battalions, batteries, squadrons all forward!” confirming that according to the people, Germany was fully prepared for war. Therefore the source links to most of the sources in showing that Germany were prepared for war.

The statistical source six shows in hard facts the preparation of each of the six major countries, the results are obvious in that between 1899 and 1914 there is a marked increase in expenditure, mainly for Germany but also Russia, France and Britain. The most interesting comparison in the naval spending where Germany tripled their expenditure between 1899 and 1914 to £47.4 million. This fact is important because it shows that between these two significant years Germany was clearly building up its navy for a reason. These figures are quite clear in showing that Germany did in fact stage a military build-up, but whether it was in preparation for war is not suggested. Source six supports sources one, three, four and five by factually proving that Germany was building up its armed forces between 1899 and 1914. However it does also prove the points in source one and four that the reason for this was the military build-up of other countries, although they are not to the same extent.

The six sources contribute in different ways to make it clear that Germany was very clearly military minded between 1899 and 1914. However they do not show the reason for this build-up. The sources suggest a mixture of preparation for war, paranoia, greed for power and innocence and so therefore, given the circumstances of the war that we have the luxury of seeing, we must assume that in one way or another Germany was preparing for war.

Richard Andrews

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Tuesday, April 27, 2004

After much consideration and prayer I have signed away the next three years of my life to... the University of Sheffield. After much consideration I went against my early thoughts as I decided that Sheffield would be the best place for me to go. I'm happy with this decision and very much excited about next year. I already know Sheffield quite well having visited a few times which is an advantage. I know where I want to live (Earnshaw Hall) the church i'm going to go to (Wycliffe Independent Church- Pastored by Spencer Cunnah) at least initially. So obviously thats good news as it'll hopefully root me straight away. Plus I have a very good friend in Rach there who will help me i'm sure :) So yeah thats hopefully where i'll be next year (still got the wonderful prospect of exams to come :D)

Listening to now: Lost Prophets- The Fake Sound of Progress

Saturday, April 24, 2004

I have two things on my agenda today.

Firstly rugby. Today I completed my second (and final) match of the season against Sandbach 3rd XV. Before I talk about the match I must first say a word on the strength of the opposition. Sandbach 3rds were very good. Sandbach have a great rugby system in place with five senior teams and a complete youth system (as soon as they come out of the womb they're taught line out codes:- A is for Alpha Centura (4 jumps and misses 7 collects at back) etc) so they are naturally a very good team. With that build up in mind the score was... Sandbach 52 Congleton 12 *cringe* No seriously they were very good, we were supposed to play the 4ths but the 3rds didn't have a game so we played them. Having said that, my performance wasn't all that bad. I only played the second half and we were 32-0 down at half time so in effect MY game was only a 20-12 loss :D Yours truely scored his second try in all competitions giving a 100% record :D It has to be said that they really were very good and, whilst we didn't play anywhere near as well as we can, we were out-classed. Even with a Sandbach First team number 8 after ours was rushed to hospital with shoulder and knee injuries (he won't mess with me again). So there we are. An enjoyable afternoon of rugby in the sun that resulted in a big loss for the team, a try for me and lots of bruises for everyone (especcialy me).

Secondly I think it's time I blogged on Uni's :s I'm planning on going to Uni in Spetember to study English Literature. My Six Uni's are Exeter, Sheffield, Bangor, York, Lancaster and Cardiff and I've nailed it down to either Exeter or Sheffield. My heart went out to Exeter initially but know i'm swaying towards Sheffield. Both are excellent Universities and the only real difference is their offers (AAB Exeter, ABB/AAC Sheffield) so i'll probably be choosing Sheffield :S Anyway, I have to decide on Monday and its just so annoying. I'll let you know when I decide.

Listening to now: Time of your life- Green Day

Thursday, April 22, 2004

Recently I have taken up the sport of rugby (anyone who physically knows me will immediately think 'yeah right!', 'What, girls rugby?', 'are you the water boy?' or something to that effect) and it's actually really good. The only problem is of course... umm... my lack of bulk. I'm not exactly wasting away but i'm just about 6 foot and only 10 stone so there really isn't much of me spread around. Compare this to the type of blokes I'm up against and well... it isn't a pretty picture at times. Having said that my record isn't bad. One game, one try, only a few mistakes :-) My first introduction to the game against Linley was being hit square on by a 14 stone monster outside center that, as I'm a wing, is technically supposed to be an equal for me. I thought I'd broken all my ribs, punctured both my lungs and given birth at the same time. It hurt. Having said that, being a wing means that I do hardly anything and only get beaten up about four times a match which isn't bad in comparison to most positions that are far more frequently abused. AND wingers are about 80% more likely to score :) The point of this dreadful whinge of a post? My second match is on Saturday (having been ill or away the last two weeks) so if I never blog again then that's why ;)

Listening to now: Smooth by Santana feat. Rob Thomas

Tuesday, April 20, 2004

I've been thinking about music quite a lot recently, and have decided to come up with my definative list of albums. This is all my opinion so you can take notice of it if you want or ignore it if you want. These are the five best albums (according to me) that I own:

5) Santana- Supernatural.
This was my first Santana album and also my first introduction to a truely great non-blues guitarist. The thing that most impresses me about Santana is his ability to take virtually any genre of music and put his amazing guitar riffs over the top with positive effects. He may not have the greatest voice (nor the greatest dress sense) but that man can play the guitar. Track highlight? Smooth feat. Rob Thomas

4) Green Day- Warning.
Not the best band ever, not the greatest musicians or singers, not the greatest lyrics but when I listen to this album I can't help but sit back and relax, smile and think..... dude. Everyone knows Green Day are just this Punk Rock band with incredible names (Billy Joe and Tres Cool) that can only play about four chords but what the heck! This album is just cool and theres no other word for it. Sometimes you don't have to be a technically sound band if you make good songs. Track highlight? Macy's Day Parade (arguably Green Day's best song)

3) The Flaming Lips- Yoshimi Battles the Pink Robots
This is a new album for me but after, say, 10 or so listens it rockets right up to number 3. I've known the likes of Fight Test and YBTPR part 1 for a while and whilst those are two lovely songs they aren't the jewels of the album. What I really enjoy about The Flaming Lips is their ability to use so much 'sound' , the density of their songs is almost intoxicating. Track Highlight? In The Morning Of The Magicians, magic, just magic

2) Coldplay- A Rush Of Blood To The Head
Coldplay are great. Everyone who isn't a purist, loser or maniac knows that. And as someone whos been into them pretty much from the beginning (well on a National scale anyway) I'm of the opinion that AROBTTH is the finest of their two albums. 'Parachutes' was great and everyone dobted that Coldplay would ever be able to beat it but they did. They learnt from experience and created an album that, at it's core, is still very similar to 'Parachutes' and is yet much more complex. Twelve fantastic songs that make one brilliant album. Track Highlight? Amsterdam

2) Radiohead- Ok Computer
What else can be said about this album? Nothing. So I won't. This is the greatest album I own. Track Highlight? Don't be silly, but if you really push me then the subtle and sublime Exit Music (For A Film).


Listening to now: Obvious- Blink 182

Wednesday, April 14, 2004

Ok so here I am, after a gap of 59 days I am finally prepared to continue with my blogging. The reason for such a long absence? Well to be truthful I've just been lazy :) I can't imagine why. For all those that are interested I'll give you a brief overview of my life over the past few months.

My little Edexcel problem was nicely cleared up and I was emphatically cleared of all 'charges'. In the end I got A for English Language, A for History and a well deserved D for French (previoulsy a U). So know I have to make some serious decisions on Higher education: Exeter or Sheffield, Exeter or Sheffield, Exeter or Sheffield...

Other areas of life... just had the yearly YP camp in Quinta, Shropshire. It was actually rather good, the preaching (with the exception of Wem) was excellent, epilogues were really interesting, I got to know some people, there were a couple of conversions so yeah... time well spent really. But now it's just work :s bit of a bummer to be honest, camp is great but once it's over there's nothing there :s that probably sounds stupid but hey.

And now I have nothing else to say, so I'll leave a tiny piece of myself here, in this galaxy of madness.

Listening to now: Seventy Times 7- Brand New